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[Rooobet]

A splendid animation

This a marvellous flash depicting the struggle of lower class society, trying to break free from a robotic society through a never ending cycle. The concepts behind this flash are extensive and emotionally deep, people who don't appreciate this flash are clearly uneducated faggots.

Click-Me responds:

You've captured the essence of my vision in its simplistic beauty. Kudos to you fine gentleman!

[Friends of Helimon: demo]

Very nice

This is a very promising looking demo and I look forward to the final product. Not much to really say as it's obviously going to be cleaned up a fiar bit in the final product as I would imagine.

[Unconfidential: Episode 1]

funny and original

I won't lie to you in the sense that the animation was a little rough but it was still a great submission, the style of humor reminded me of south park and the joeks were short, sharp and sweet. Definately looking forward to the next one.

[Mario and Link: A Meeting]

Decent for your first flash however

You and many people like yourself need to bear in mind that while this was a decent effort for your first flash you still shouldn't even think it's passable for the portal. First of all it was way too short and had no sound what so ever combined with the fact that you only used video game sprites. You may have struggled to pull this together so maybe you should spend a good month or so honing in on your skills in order to submit something that's worth critiquing.

[Phobotech's Flash Test]

Nice practice Animation

I understand that this flash was made for the soul purpose of honing in on you ski11z so I won't bash the fact that it had no story, becuase if you wanted to practice story writing you'd have written one in your blog;) The animation was very smooth and moved at a nice frame rate. As it was short there isn't much to comment on though next time you may want to practice by putting skins onto you characters. If you want an easy way to do frame by frame I'm afraid there really is none and like you queried it will come in time, sorry. All things aside good job and I hope to see a full fledged flash from you soon.

Galneda responds:

I'll be sure to let you know when this next one is out! Thanks for the honesty in your review!

[Cry with my laceration]

Great Work

one again you've shown me another fine flash with eastern expressionism in it and you did a great job keep them coming

[Shamoozal: GFGames #4]

stick to the humor

this was a decent submission though I didn't think it fitted together with the rest of the series. It's never a good idea to move into art house drama once you've been established as a comedic writer unless you've had several blood clots to the brain

Shamoozal responds:

Now that's a silly thing to say. Ages ago Steven Spielberg directed the kid's movie Hook. Now, with your logic, since he made a children's film, he wouldn't be allowed to go on and direct say, Saving Private Ryan or Shindler's List?

This short is as serious as you want it to be.

[How To: Win a Daily]

hillarious if not awesome

It was short and sweet and at first I expected it to be rather genric but boy was I wrong , not only is this flash funny it's straight to the point and honest , hope to see more like this one

Little-Renastair responds:

Not sure what you mean be generic but alright thanks ;)